Sleeping Valor

Sorry haven't read this until now. Got caught up in some school work and didn't get the chance to go online recently. I can only suggest that if you wanted ...

Isn't Yellow Card the name of a band...? Not that I know of. I don't really know why I picked that for the title, I plan on changing it later. ...

Here's the next bit. I'm not as happy with it as the first; I could definitely use some advice on how to make it better. ☺☼► For three years Jeffery ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

after all the times i've shout someone came to lead me out *hugs* It's so sweet it makes you want to go and help somebody. Great poem.

To jchoufani, you need to fix some parts in your writings. sometimes there are just pieces of a word in sentence. on some words your forget like three letters. one ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

making her first and steadfast impression of her teacher and for a relived moment she felt the shadows eyes fall off her "and for a relieved moment" is what I ...

*Hapilly tears her friend's story to peices* I love you, that's why I am going to help you make this better. Chapter 1 Introduction. Is it the introduction to Chapter ...

Woo. Interesting plot. I like where this is going. Keep it up. :wink:

He nudged the young teen besides him and gave him the all-knowing eye. I think it should be beside and not besides. “They are never gonna know what him ‘em.” ...

p.s how long did it take to write all this ? Hm...I worked on it over the evening but I was interupted a couple times. I'd say absolutely no more ...

-I'm still working out the connection between Saase and Earth. I have an idea on how to work it into the story, but for the moment I'll leave the prologue ...

Glad you liked it. Yes, I did make the font a little large. I'll change it back to a smaller font when I'm fully happy with it. I find ti ...

By separating the text, do you mean pressing 'enter' and going to a new line, or puting an indendation in the text periodically? I never was good at 'seperating the ...